Considering the size of the sunspots, I think that you have a convenient f/d (and sampling) rate.
Is your mylar an astrosolar sheet? Your focusing seems to be correct; perhaps the turbulence was too strong.
Try to add a green or red filter to minimize the atmospheric differential refraction. And morning is better.
That's a good first result despite a "small" aperture. I look forward to see your next captures.
Nicolas.